Post by account_disabled on Feb 19, 2024 8:07:10 GMT
However, there are some things I would test to try and make this page even better. 1. Who’s Dave? I’d put the name and role right next to Dave’s head so people immediately see how their enterprise software is related to a big company. 2. Don’t make me think This headline is not bad, but I think for extra clarity, there could be a tagline next to the logo that quickly explains what Magento do. 3. This form is gorgeous Save this form right now and use it as inspiration in your future landing pages. It ties in a short, well-organized form with good copy, a bright call to action, and even .
4. Don’t be redundant The company name here is redundant. Use this Buy TG Database space more effectively by drawing the reader into the first paragraph. I would drop the company name and instead use A complete eCommerce solution for businesses 5. Features and benefits galore! These features connect with the reader and are very effective at getting across the benefits of the product. Well done! Netsuite netsuite2 Click for full-size image Oy, where to begin…. this page is stuck in 2004 and needs a complete overhaul. The copy is all over the place and there is no clear direction of where you’re supposed to read.
Clean up the layout and have a progression in your copy to lead the visitor through a thought process. Let’s at least talk about WHY these elements are so bad. 1. Sad looking headline This headline at least tells me what what I’m about to click away from. The headline doesn’t say a thing about me and my business. There needs to be a connection between the site and the visitor. Why not start right away with the benefits of this software? The one accounting solution that can lower your IT costs and improve productivity 2.
4. Don’t be redundant The company name here is redundant. Use this Buy TG Database space more effectively by drawing the reader into the first paragraph. I would drop the company name and instead use A complete eCommerce solution for businesses 5. Features and benefits galore! These features connect with the reader and are very effective at getting across the benefits of the product. Well done! Netsuite netsuite2 Click for full-size image Oy, where to begin…. this page is stuck in 2004 and needs a complete overhaul. The copy is all over the place and there is no clear direction of where you’re supposed to read.
Clean up the layout and have a progression in your copy to lead the visitor through a thought process. Let’s at least talk about WHY these elements are so bad. 1. Sad looking headline This headline at least tells me what what I’m about to click away from. The headline doesn’t say a thing about me and my business. There needs to be a connection between the site and the visitor. Why not start right away with the benefits of this software? The one accounting solution that can lower your IT costs and improve productivity 2.